Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
PrimalApex, Chapter 15 of Journey was amazing! I can’t believe that Mira is actually Nightfall’s mother all along. Kinda messed up trying to kill your own son.. AND OHHHH THATS WHAT THE TEASER IS ABOUT. So I was a bit wrong about a few facts. The Teaser happened BEFORE the events of Journey, not after Forest lands on The Island. So that’s why he left the flower at the obelisk (a meeting place). It was to resign from the Order! That is super crazy and I actually skipped over this on my first read through of Chapter 15. Also when Nightfall says this mother is the “district” leader, that leads me to believe that perhaps each district is an ARK. Maybe? I dunno, perhaps, maybe a district is just a region within The Island like the swamp or redwood or what not. And of course Forest would be surprised because ascension terminals like the Volcano don’t exist on Fjordur. Hmm, so the rune worked on the volcano, but not at the obelisk. Perhaps it has something to do with the linkage to the Overseer. Fenrir is the final boss of Fjordur, and the fight can be accessed through the obelisk, which is why when Rust threw the rune it activated and transferred them to the other ARKs. The Volcano on the other hand is the link to the Overseer, the final boss of The Island which is why it worked then. Hmm, what’s this fuzz surrounded by light? Maybe Forest accidentally brought Nightfall with him. I think it makes the most sense because The Order is obviously ver important. Hmm, storm clouds. Perhaps they’ve landed on Scorched Earth next right in the middle of an electrical storm or whatever it’s called. Anyway, that was some fun stuff. Can’t wait for the next chapters of Journey and Ultimus!
Sorry Mr.GhostGamer, one of us was going to. But Moon wasn’t able to use the dex at the time, and Ben quickly suggested that Sunny could just relay it to you. Apologies for that. We’ll try to use the dex more often for TOT information.
Break-It, I hope you did well with the Hunter!!! If you want to talk about Ark related stuff other than stories then yeah!! We can talk about that!! But the stories we mention are everyone’s stories!! And if you’re looking for another story to read, I suggest you read Pandora Chronicles next!! It starts in Allo ans Heroes of Pandora and it’s a real awesome story!! It’s a bit long later but it’s awesome and worth the read!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Wyvernian, Chapter 4 of ToP was really awesome! So Ryker and Ras have actually been on Pandora before… interesting. They also have their own rag tag team besides themselves; although none of them have taken the intelligence serum except Ryker, who has apparently taken a perfected version of it on his home ark. The way Ryker talks about this perfected serum leads me to believe that the intelligence serum on Pandora only works on primates or apes, since they’re closest relatives to humans. Ras already seems to be missing his arm, but he doesn’t have his razor blade arm yet. Ryker can talk perfectly fine which means he isn’t missing his lower jaw. Yet. It says that Wretch is a “mechanical genius”. Could that mean that he is the one who will eventually create the prosthetic parts for Ryker and Ras?
Ryker seems to be considered the most knowledgeable and therefore the most intelligent out of the group. But for some reason he didn’t consider using the humans as manpower to fight the guardians? It leads me to believe that Salizar is far more cunning than Ryker. This could be because of a variety of reasons. It could be the fact that Salizar is an ape; which means his planning skills and what not already have a boost, and Ryker is just a Yutyrannus, a reptile running on instinct. Plus, both creatures took completely different intelligence serums. Ryker’s “perfected serum” may just be perfect because it can work on any creature. It might not necessarily mean that it gives him a perfect intelligence.
Hmm, the group have also been on Hades. Interesting. They lost a lot of members there too because of an “incident”. Based on the time reference it could be completely possible that they had an encounter with Cinder and her wyverns. Cinder and her wyverns would definitely outmatch Ryker’s land-based army/group, which is why so many casualties were made. That also maybe how Cinder learned more about the ARKs. The way Killion reacted to this makes me believe that a close friend of his perished on Hades. This means that the group has been on three ARKs thus far: The Home ARK, Hades, and Pandora.
Another character that intrigues me is Asher. She’s a carcharodontosaurus who apparently went on a rampage throughout her tribe. But she should be far more powerful than Ryker and shouldn’t be affected by his fear roar. How did Asher come to work UNDER Ryker, if she should be stronger than him? This could tie into the whole Knowledge is Power thingie, but if Asher is a quiet character so I don’t think she would have worked for him out of respect. I’d imagine that a character like her would just want to live a peaceful life, not go to the Earth. Perhaps Ryker did something to her which caused her to work with him out of fear.
Ras also doesn’t like to talk about his past. He doesn’t even talk about how he met Ryker. Perhaps that’s how he lost his arm?
And Ryker really wants to go to the Earth badly, because it calls out to him. That’s probably the element’s fault. It probably wants Ryker really badly because of the intelligence serum. Or something i dunno.
And finally I believe Salizar’s plan is going to involve getting rid of Ryker’s bottom jaw. Ryker’s fear roar is a very powerful thing and if he uses it on any of his group, pretty much all will be affected (except Asher). So if he gets rid of it… he can’t use it. It all makes sense now. He’s probably going to use Asher to his advantage.
Wyvernian, read the latest chapter! It was great! Despite them all being basically villains I enjoy their character and am excited to see more of them.
Also, message for everyone, I just got mothertruckin globally blocked from Fandom for no reason whatsoever, I filed a report and asked for help with that, so hopefully it’ll let me post again— if not I’ll just make a new account sigh, but then I won’t be an admin and no one will be able to like, manage the darn wiki
So confused
—Moon
Wyvernian, I read chapter 4 of ToP!!! It was great!!!! I love Ryker and his Russian accent!!! So he has been experimented on with a similar serum to heighten intelligence. So that could mean he made the post apocalyptic attachments for themselves, or maybe it was Wretch? I can’t wait to see more of the others too!!! Ras, Killion, Asher and Wretch seem like really cool characters for villains!!! And they’ve been on Hades!?! So they might know who Stainly is!!! I’m very excited to learn more about these new villains!!!! I really enjoy it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
MGG, I can’t wait to see the next chapters to those!!! And for Life Before, don’t worry about getting out it out to us until you feel like you can make the best version of it!!! That doesn’t mean we don’t want to see it!! (Believe me, I WANT IT!!!) but I want it in the best way possible, and that takes time!!
From Ben
Glad you all liked the previous chapters! Its nice to be back on the roll I'm used to. 25 chapters left! Crazy stuff... 75% done with TAOH and then i can finally rest 💤😴
PrimalApex I enjoy your theory about the Alpha Raptor. It does not have an implant attribute. Its a bit less complicated than that. But at the same time not really.
i wouldnt say its a person inhabiting its body..? But theres definitely something.
As a wise woman once said... it's all about the eyes
Ben I read chapter 75!!!! It was Awesome!!! Wait… does the alpha raptor have an implant attribute? It literally pulled a Scarecrow on Samuel!!! And it spoke, not just mimicking others but actually spoke and judged Samuel on his behavior. It acted… almost human. OMG!!! It was a human!!!! It’s like the Agents!!! It’s a person in a raptors body!!!! Ruby saving him was great and honestly kinda sweet what she said there. And it looks like they’ll meet up with Bob and Alan!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
MrGhostGamer it seems that you are up for the next chapter of TOT! Been a while since we’ve heard about Hope’s Call and Life Before, how are those two stories going?
PrimalApex, Chapter 37 of TOT was PHENOMENAL! The training session between Freya and Aurora was really well-done and pretty accurate. It’s really nice we’re getting some more time with Freya as we didn’t know much of her and how much of a beast at fighting she really is. I’m surprised Aurora managed to hold on for as long as she did, considering she was literally just about to graduate. Then again she’s the valedictorian, so she had to be a fast learner. And she was Number 1 on the tennis team, so she has to have good endurance/stamina too. Anyway that was a really cool scene and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I guess Freya’s the strongest fighter out of the Ultimus group?
The tussle between the Shrunken King Titan and Apex was really awesome as well! (how big is the King Titan now again?). Ahh, Sig’s at it with the baloney of messing with others. So we get to see her personality in action, that’s cool. I enjoy her character and I cannot wait to see her in Journey, it’s nice to see these future characters. Dr Bubba and Pat are once again scheming. I think Dr Bubba would be a great plot point for the future. Since he is the only one capable of creating the transformation serum, maybe Professor Rockwell will try to coerce him into making it for him and in return tell him the secrets of element (but both will try to backstab the other). Samuel might consider it too, but he’d think it’s too risky. I have other plans for him anyway. At first the thoughts Apex had before fighting with King Titan, but then I realized… IT WAS SIG. Which is really cool by the way. She’s definitely gonna cause problems for the other villains. And the King Titan was really about to obliterate the Shadowkeep with his one-shot punch… Nice. At least Jethezzar intervened or else they’d all be goners.
This chapter was really well set up and will be a great opportunity to introduce Jerry, Michael (who is probably going to get tossed around by the former because Michael is the type of person Jerry hates), Prince Caldren, and Zeer. I can’t wait to see what MGG does for TOT next!
Oh boy, it’s been a bit. Been meaning to say this for a while but I keep forgetting or get distracted away from it.
Wyvernian, Tales of Pandora are Great!!! I love all the Cameos!!! Salizar’s and Caesar’s Origins are sad, I feel bad for Caesar. Salizar…
Primalis is Brutal!!! I love how brutal he is!!!! And Salizar’s is escape is brutal and awesome!!!! It’s great!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, read all of the chapters!!! They are all great!!! Dang so all of the Agents are possessing the bosses!!! And they were all members of his previous experiments!!! The President is very corrupt and powerful it seems from his implant tribute. I’m still not sure what it is though, telekinesis?
Sylveevee is in the story!!!! And she has a very interesting attribute to her implant!!! The amplification to attributes is insane!!! Characters like Tiffany would be insanely powerful with an amplification!!
Paul has already met her and doesn’t even know it yet!!! Ugh!!! Pain!!! And the fight between June, Paul and Carlos was awesome!!! June is really powerful!!! But Carlo’s with a Frying Pan is even more powerful!!!😂 that scene really got me!! I really enjoyed all of them!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
From Ben
Wyvernian, I read Chapter 3 of ToP and it was AWESOME. Salizar’s battle against the soldiers was really cool and pretty brutal, and it explains a lot of things too. I can’t imagine wearing the skull of some human tho everywhere I went. Salizar is a very dangerous monkey, it makes me believe he was the smartest out of all of them (he also learned the fastest out of all of them). And Dr. Primalis is going to train Caesar now? Oh great I thought this guy was gonna die. Anyway that was a cool chapter and I can’t wait to see more of Salizar’s backstory. I’m guessing we’ll soon learn how he convinced the Count to drink the Broodmother’s blood. He’s a mastermind in the making.
From Ben
Wyvernian, I read Chapter 2 of ToP… Oh boy, looks like I’ve kicked the bucket already! And Dr. Flight and probably Dr. Primalis too since Pandora is getting wiped off the map. Gosh I wish we had a better ruler. Poor monkeys, friends to natural enemies. Although Dr. Primalis is just plain mean for no reason. Why wouldn’t you sedate someone before experimenting on them? He sounds just like a mad scientist for no reason. I’m guessing they aren’t going to put Caesar down since he’s going on missions with them, according to HoP. We still don’t know how Salizar gets his burn scar and armor. Hmm, I’m just more interested than ever. Good stuff, seeya later.
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