Heroes of Pandora

Chapter 1 ~rewrite~ (there’s a prologue on allo read it first)

Caesar was a mostly dark brown mesopithicus he had green eyes, and a darker brown back stripe, (like his namesake) due to human experimentation he had hyper intelligence. Caesar was swinging through the trees like a wraith, quickly and quietly, no creature noticed him until he reached his destination; a tree near the ocean that had the most terrific view. he sat there almost every morning and ate his favorite breakfast; tintoberries. he was watching the scenery when he saw a dodo attempting to fight a pack of dilophosaurs, “strange..” he said quietly, the dodo ninja-kicked one dilo in the face the kick knocked it unconscious, then he leaped out of the way just before getting hit by some Venom spit, the spit hit one of the other dilos in the face and it ran off. There was only two more dilophosaurus, the dodo smiled, his smile was strange, kinda creepy. Caesar found this show both amusing and interesting, he wondered why this dodo was so odd. The dodo kicked one of the dilos, but it just made the little beast angrier, furious in fact, the dilo was not having a great day, his breakfast had knocked out one of his minions, the other ran away after getting spat on, and now this dodo had the audacity to kick him, he was going to kill this weakling or die trying. He leapt at the dodo and it leaped away only to be cornered by the other, for the first time the dodo was struck with fear. Caesar out of either instinct, compassion, or pity he wasnt sure, leapt into action, he fashioned a slingshot out of a twig and some old saddle leather he found a wile ago, he grabbed a pebble and shot at the dilo, the shot hit home, right on the back of the head, the dilo was out cold, the leader, very confused, looked to see where the rock came from, he noticed Caesar to late, the last thing he saw was a mesopithicus with a slingshot, and a rock coming at him, the dodo was also confused until he saw the monkey, he just said “wow, thanks.” “no problem.” said Caesar. “you are a mighty warrior!” the dodo said. “huh?” Said Caesar “your my captain now I will follow you forever.” “what?” Caesar said. “Your my captain, you know my commanding officer? I’ll do anything you ask.” he said with that creepy smile, Caesar now realized the smile was genuine happiness… he wasn’t a normal dodo for sure. “The names Ron, what’s yours? or should I just call you captain?” Caesar was about to answer when they heard a roar, a huge booming roar. “what was that, a rex?!?” Said Ron, “no… so much worse…” Caesar said, the roar came again but louder, “RUN” said Caesar, “ha! I laugh in the face of danger!” Ron said, then he saw the dragon. A fearsome black and red beast, his roar ripped the skies apart. (figure of speech not literally) Ron then ran faster than Caesar had ever seen a dodo run ‘that’s more like a dodo’ Caesar thought. The dragon swooped down by the ocean and snatched a megalodon, and then flew away towards the jungle. then started scorching the forest with his fire breath for no apparent reason, Caesar smelled the fire, and said “hurry!” Then wondered who he was talking to, Ron was way ahead, they ran until they reached Caesar’s home, (a large tree with a hole in it) Ron was already inside, and Caesar wondered how he knew that it was his house, the dragon got bored of destruction and flew away, “that was close.” Caesar said. “What was that Beast!” Said Ron. “the dragon.” said Caesar. “What’s a dragon and how is it here?” Said Ron, Caesar looked at him gravely, “Humans.”

Ohhhhhh man this is sooooo much better, year ago me sucked at writing 🤣

-Wyvernain

The Terrible Demise of Tortuga.

Chapter one.

Finally their ship reached the docks. Aragorn led the way down the ramp unto the dock. He was followed by his wife Arianna who was leading the two youngest twins, Josephina and Jaquin helped by the oldest child Emma. Jack and Jay trailed behind the group. Arianna had long golden strawberry hair with shining hazel eyes. Emma had dark red hair and light green eyes. Jack and Jay looked almost identical. They both had shortish-long jet black hair. The differences between the two of them was that Jay had dark green eyes and slightly longer hair then Jack while Jack’s eyes were brown like his father’s. Jaquin had short blond hair and hazel eyes like their mother. Josephina had long blond hair and hazel eyes like their mother. Jack and Jay were thirteen. Emma was nineteen. And Jaquin and Josephina were six. The mayors observed them as the walked down the ship ramp. Mayor Reine pulled out a few pieces of paper and gingerly set them on a table that was at the docks. Mayor Roi motioned for the family to come to the desk. “Welcome to Tortuga!” Mayor Roi said. “If you would please state your names.” He said. “I’m Aragorn, this my wife Arianna and my children, Emma, Jack,Jay, Josephina, and Jaquin. Aragorn said coldly to him. “You have some strange names in your family.” Mayor Reine said. Aragorn stiffened. Arianna grabbed her husband’s hand and squeezed his hand comfortingly. “Thank you.” Arianna said. “Now, do we need to sign paperwork or anything?” The mayors smiled.

After they had signed paperwork they spent the rest of the day moving box’s into their new house. And by “we” I mean Jack,Jay,and Aragorn. Emma helped Arianna with keeping Jaquin and Josephina busy. It was almost seven thirty pm whenever they were bringing in the last boxes. “These boxes are especially heavy.” Jay remarked. “May I help with those?” Someone asked. They started. A man stood there with dark brown hair and a beard that had streaks of grey running through it and dark blue eyes . “Who are you?” Aragorn asked. The man smiled. “My name is Aaron Buckleshoot. Pleasure to meet you!” Aaron said. He held out his hand for Aragorn to shake.

Next chapter coming up soon! The first chapter was in Achatina.

-SunnyFox57.

Bruh every one say this is a diplo with spikes but its a real dinosaur look up amargasaurus haters whi hate this but i had no encounter with this saurapod but the taming is harsh

One more day everyone is everyone excited

Moon Tales

Season 1 - Episode 3

As soon as the dragon came flying toward them Andromeda quickly ran away. John turned away in confusion, “Where are you going?” “DUDE WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR, RUN YOU IDIOT!” John didnt ask any questions and followed Andromeda. As Andromeda turned back she noticed that the dragon had a rider on top. It was a man with nothing but his underwear on. The rider screamed out “Hey come back here!” “we’ll come back if you promise not to kill us” John shouted back getting more and more tired. “Okay I won’t kill any of you if you just stop running” John let out a sigh of relief and turned around to face the dragon. Andromeda kept running, and as she looked back she groaned to herself. “What is this dude doing is he that stupid” Andromeda just wanted to keep running away but John seemed to know a lot about this strange world. Even if he was stupid he knew a lot. She didn’t know if she could survive without his knowledge, so she turned back, and walked back to the wyvern.

The man hopped off the wyvern and looked at the two. He pet the dragon. “Good girl Crystal”. As Andromeda got closer she saw crystals sticking out of it. John seemed very flabbergasted by it. “What is that?” the man smirked “a crystal wyvern. they may be easy to tame but theyre very powerful and strong.” “i didn’t know they were a thing” John admitted. “Well I transferred it from the Crystal Isles. Then I saw you on the Sand Clan’s territory and chased you down… why are you two here?”

“Well i just woke up here” Andromeda explained “i want to go home” the man chuckled at her words “yeah that’s not happening, there’s no way back home” Andromeda glared at the man “youre lying”. The man ignored her and turned to John “what an annoying girl, what about you?” John cleared his throat “i’m John i also woke up like a few days ago. this is Andromeda she’s my friend” Andromeda rolled her eyes “yeah we’re friends” she sarcastically said. The man turned away and climbed back onto the back of his crystal wyvern “well i’m Blake. You’re on Sand Clan’s territory so scram” john looked at Andromeda and them back at Blake “why can’t we just join Sand Clan?” Andromeda looked confused “what why would we want that?” Blakes eyes lit up “you wanna join? Nobody wants to join us they think we’re too weak” John chuckled “well you seem nice i bet your leader’s even nicer” Blake smiled even harder “he sure is want to meet him if you two want to join?” John jumped up and down “of course! Take us to him!”

Blake patted the back of his crystal wyvern and John hopped on. John signaled to Andromeda “come on let’s go!” Andromeda sighed, she thought “what could go wrong” and she jumped atop the crystal wyvern too. Blake quickly patted the crystal wyvern and it took off into the skies. Everyone held on tight, and they soon flew toward a strange flying metal thingie in the sky. It was glowing red

“What is that?” Andromeda asked

“An obelisk, our base is here”

hello this is Moon Tales Girl again I hope you enjoy the third episode of the first season of Moon Tales. i am trying out this new "paragraph" thing which my cousin said i should do to make it easier to read and i totally agree what about you? do you like this or one super big paragraph?

PS: my favorite ice cream flavor is rocky road

The ARKS: part 3

As Survivor wondered and Jeffery the Dodo wandering around trying to get some berries for food, Survivor thought of having a house, Jeffery agreed, so after some time farming wood and mainly thatch, he had enough to build a small 2x2 thatch house, fitted with some storage and a campfire, he called this place home, the next day came and he thought he could take on a couple of piranhas for some food, instead he got eaten alive. “Well, that was… i little more brutal, but theres a sleeping bag at my base so im gonna respawn there,” his vision turns white, and he’s back on his feet, just where he left off, so he went to the river and grabbed it before he gets eaten- again. “Alrighty, i think i need a bow and arrow now… so he grabs sone thatch, flint and fiber* for arrows and wood and fiber for the bow. Feeling confident, he decides to hunt some Piranhas and the occasional Dilo, after a sone grinding, he reaches the level to make tranq arrows, but he lacked something: Narcoberries, so he gathered some by himself and made a mortar and pestle to grind with spoiled meat to narcotic, then he dipped that arrow into a narcotic, after some times doing that over and over, he plans to tame a parasaur.

~Cross Platform Guy

And I will enjoy that meat and think about how I forget to type my name on the comments I make so I will not make story until it gets released- Mr Arky <- I REMEMBERED

The Cave of Secrets Chapter 2:

Thank you so much if you are still here and like the story! It means a lot to me, even if you don't up or leave feedback!

"Wake up Dusk," A voice whispered. "Danger is coming." Dusk jerked his eyes open and looked around quickly for places to run or hide. He was next to a small river. Behind him, stone cliffs blocked off any escape. Across the river, there was a small forest. Dusk knew there was danger somewhere, yet where and what would it be. Something hissed loudly. Dusk ran into the forest, surprised from the hiss. Moments after he ran into the forest, a massive spino lumbered into the river. It hissed loudly then ducked down to grab a fish. It lifted up the fish and swallowed it whole. "You don't belong here, you filthy surface Raptor." A Raptor hissed, shoving him out of the forest. Dusk froze after being shoved out. The spino stared into his eyes and said, "You will make quite a fine meal, Raptor is a rare treat that I will get to have."

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed.

It looks really cool ngl I hope Ill be able to get the lost Island map

Jointed mysteries

My iPad is only 56% plus, I was grounded most of the day so, if it’s short, sorry..also in the last chapter I think the carno’s name was Sorow.. and moon, sorry if you think I’m copying you, I got this story thinking from you. -SpecialRaptor

Chapter 3

Anubis looked into Fury’s yellow eyes. “Fury! Are you ok? Are you hurt?”

He said frightened and worried. “No…i’m- he saw the big carno named Sorow -AHHH!!! CARNO!” Fury yelled. “Shh, relax Fury. Look. This is Sorow. He’s nice. Right, SOROW!?” he yelled to Sorow. “Of course,” Sorow continued. “It’s my job to save people.” He said politely. “Sorow? Haven’t i…” Fury said. “(GASP) YOUR APART OF THE PROPHECY!” Fury yelled in amazement. Fury finally got up on his talons and had a great look at Sorow. “Uhhhh…” he said to Fury. “Wait…Prophecy? You know that voidwyrm named Nola? If you do…then I know about that “saving the world from this, RANDOM villain” thing.” He said. “Maybe I can show you the next dinosaur involved in the prophecy.” He said again. They wandered somewhere where therizinosaurus’s mostly come. Big stomping came towards them. “I think we should get out of the way of this brontosaurus.” Sorow said to the both of them. They started wandering somewhere away from the brontosaurus. They soon encountered a therizinosaurus. “Hello.” it said. “Um..hello?” Fury said back. “You 3 look hungry. Have you eaten?” It said back. “Yes or..at least I have.” Sorow said. “We ate when we left. But, maybe…only maybe..” Fury continued. “We CAN at least have 1 more snack..” he said finishing his sentence. “What’s your name?” Anubis said to the therizinosaurus. “Shuttle.” He said. “Shuttle? Hmmm…” Fury hissed thinking. “I also know something that Nola said about your name.” Fury said to Shuttle. “NOLA!? YOU KNOW THAT VOIDWYRM!?” Shuttle said putting his big claws up high. “Yes, we do. That means, your apart of the prophecy. You would help us “save the world” right?” Anubis asked and at the same time answered. “Yes. I would. It sounds cool anyway!” Shuttle said. “Not to me..” Fury hissed back. After a while of wandering around the island, finally, 2 velonasaurs appeared right in front of them. “Stop right there!” One male said. “ your not going ANYWHERE!” The other male said.

The heroes of pandora

Chapter 1 (there’s a prologue on allo read it first)

Caesar was a mostly dark brown mesopithicus, but with green eyes, and a darker brown back stripe, (like his namesake) due to human experimentation he had hyper intelligence. Caesar was jumping through the trees like a wraith, quickly but quietly no creature noticed him until he reached his destination, a tree near the ocean that had a terrific view, he sat there almost every morning, and ate his breakfast, tintoberries, he was watching the scenery when he saw a dodo fighting dilophosaurs, “strange” he said quietly the dodo ninja-kicked one dilo in the face, knocked it out, then leaped out of the way just before getting hit by some poison spit, the spit hit one of the other dilos in the face and it ran off. There was two more left, the dodo smiled his smile was strange, kinda creepy. Caesar found this show both amusing an interesting he wondered why this dodo was so odd. The dodo kicked one of the dilos, but it just got mad, furious in fact, the dilo was not having a great day, his breakfast had knocked out one of his minions, the other ran away after getting spat on, and now this dodo had the gaul to kick him, he was going to kill this weakling or die trying. He leapt at the dodo it leaped away only to be cornered, by the other for the first time the dodo was struck with fear. Caesar out of instinct, compassion, or pity he wasnt sure, leapt into action he fashioned a slingshot out of a twig and some old saddle leather he found, he grabbed a pebble and shot the dilo that cornered the dodo, the shot hit home, right on the back of the head, the dilo was out cold, the leader, confused looked to see where the rock came from, he looked at Caesar to late, the last thing he saw was a meso with a slingshot and a rock coming at him, the dodo was also confused until he saw the monkey, he just said “uhhh thanks” “no problem” said Caesar. “your a mighty warrior” the dodo said. “huh?” Said Caesar “your my captain now I will follow you forever”, “what?” Said Caesar. “Your my captain” he said with that creepy smile, Caesar now realized the smile was genuine happiness… he wasn’t a normal dodo for sure, “My names Ron what’s yours or should I just call you captain?” Caesar was about to answer when they heard a roar, a huge roar “what was that a rex?” Said Ron, “no so much worse…” Caesar said, the roar came again louder.. closer,“RUN” said Caesar, “hah I laugh in the face of danger!” Ron said, then he saw the dragon. A fearsome black and red beast, the roar ripped the skies apart, (figure of speech not literally) Ron then uh.. evacuated… and ran faster than Caesar had ever seen a dodo run *that’s more like a dodo* Caesar thought. The dragon snatched a megalodon from the sea and flew towards the jungle, then started breathing fire on the ground, Caesar smelled the fire and said “hurry!” Then wondered who he was talking to, Ron was way ahead, they ran until they reached Caesar’s home, (a large tree with a hole in it) Ron was already inside, and Caesar wondered how he knew that it was his house, the dragon ran out of fire and flew away, “that was close” Caesar said. “What was that Beast!” Said Ron. “the dragon” said Caesar. “What’s a dragon and how is it here?” Said Ron. “Humans” Caesar said…

-writers note- when I wrote “ripped the skies apart” autocorrect made it say “roped the skies apart” 😂 good thing I went back to edit the story -wyvernian

Finally a new dinosaur to love and see

I’m glad you’re reading The Obelisk despite it being a really old and silly story of mine lol. But I know that despite its mistakes and plot holes when I was writing it, ppl still like it. I’m happy they do.

I’ll gladly talk to any other writers on Dododex like you, Moon takes girl! It makes me happy.

—Moon

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-HJK

I had a dream me and like 8 people were trying to knock it out it came out of a drop like the sky drops ummm did not go well

Ark adventures chapter 3

Liam was running for his life but then… he heard a whistle and from the trees an allosaurus pack came and started chasing him. “Don’t run you’re fine!” Esther yelled. Liam stopped running and the allosaurus pack went straight for the dilophosaurus. Then Liam realized that he was fine. “What just happened?” Liam asked. These are my allosaurus’s, Betty and Mooner.

I don’t know what to call this series but it’s chapter 2 (chapter one is in desmodus) Let me start by saying that I just started typing these stories and am still trying to improve so if you do have any tips on what the story should be called or how to help me write better thank you and if you don’t that’s fine I don’t have any good tips either so yeah let me start chapter 2…

Nic fell deeper into the cave. Only now did he truly begin to feel the pain on his ankle. As he was falling time seemed to slow down he looked around for a possible way out but there was none. He continued falling trying not cry out in pain from his ankle. He thought about the desmodus and their hideous fangs all charging toward him and he swore if he had to come back from the dead just to get revenge the would.

Nic managed to land in water. He probably did the most painful belly flop ever that did not result in death. His brain began thinking at light speed he knew he couldn’t swim and he may be able limp but it would hurt a lot. He couldn’t climb the rocks were too wet. He couldn’t do anything. He was helpless flailing his arms around in the water. Water began to enter his lungs. At that moment a sarco charged him.

It must have expected him to swim up because it went over him and he grabbed its tail it pulled him ashore. That was when he realized how weak he truly was. The sarco’s tail slipped out of his hands. He laid on the ground coughing up water. The sarco turned and glanced at him. It took one step toward him when a man in a scuba suit jumped out the water and shot it in the eye with a harpoon gun. Nic was still too weak to move but he would have ran if he didn’t have an injured ankle and of course if he could figure out how to stand up.

The man in the scuba suit walked over to Nic and held out a jar with red liquid, “Here drink this. It will help you.” He said.

“Why should I trust you.” Nic croaked

“Didn’t I just shoot a sarco in the face to save you!”

Nic was too tired to argue. He drank the red liquid and his ankle hurt less and he could actually sit up now.

“Can I have another?” Nic asked.

“Sorry that’s the only one I had left. Those araneo were a real pain.” The man replied. “So what’s your name?”

“My name’s Nic.”

“How did you get down here?”

“I fell.”

“Care to elaborate.”

“Not really.”

“Ok well you better tell me what happens when we get to my house if they haven’t found me yet.”

“If who hasn’t found you yet?” Nic asked.

“I’ll explain later. You have a lot to learn.”

Part three will probably be in araneo.

(Its DenDaDutch) "such a pain to tame these" i said so i went to ask anyone to tell me how to tame this alpha diplo kong prime says "i only tamed 1 i cant tame another anymore and why would i need one i almost unclaim this diplo go ask someone" veal came and said "so ez i can tame one for you ill carry u with my wyvern" veal says and i said.."okay ill support u if u tame 2 of them" veal said "why do u need 2 amars u gonna breed them?" Veal says and i said yea so i watched him far away so i wont get caught i used my spyglass, and he tamed them i cryopod them and went back to base and breed them. Got baby amar GREW it up and made a saddle and then it was awsome.

I thought it was a slug in its shell lol

Hi Moon Tales Girl, dropping by to agree with the others and say that some of the absolute best writers here such as MGG, Ben, Apex, Wyvernian and Sand are all male. There may even possibly be more of them on here than us females lol. And we do welcome all new people in Achatina! I remember when everyone here now joined with their stories, back when Achatina was much smaller. It’s crazy to see how much the community has grown!

—Moon