K umm second chapter to compys mysterys

I slightly change my writing style

The allosaurus roared as the three backed away, closer to the cliff and the water fall

"BlueTalon" MoonTail said " I hope you never understand the words coming out of my mouth right now". She turned toward the large carnovore " BY ORDER OF THE 7 TALONS I COMMAND YOU TO STOP" yelled MoonTail.

Firefly was making a loud noise that was ear breaking. "Umm grrrr? Dont make me come over there mr. Allo, have you seen my teeth? Said firefly.

The huge dinosaur cast a grim glance at BlueTalon that made her scales crawl.

With one swift movement the allosaurus knoked her out.

She had no idea how much time had passed, but when she woke up, instead of her friends, BlueTalon saw a pack of microraptors.

"My name is nightTalon" said one coming up beside her.

"NightTalon, this young compy has no buisiness with peasents like you" said a commanding, gruff voice.

"Sorry, sir" replied NightTalon, "I am SilverScar, leader of this village of microraptors". BlueTalon let out a gasp, MoonTail had told her of a village of microraptors that inhabited an abandoned bunch of buildings left by

hoo-mans. This was that village. MoonTail had also told her that if anything were to happen to MoonTail, the microraptors would find her. "No... no... this can't be happening" gasped BlueTalon.

SilverScar left BlueTalon in a hut made of wood, not long after NightTalon came in.

"Umm... this may sound weird" BlueTalon began "But do you know what the seven talons are?" "Hmmm... someone shouted it while I was being attacked by a weird, small and spiky bronto.

Just then, a small voice started screaming "THEIF, THEIF SOMEDINO STOLE THE ELEMENT"

The two rushed to the scene, and SilverScar was already there.

He turned sharply to BlueTalon"YOU! I should have never trusted an outsider in the first place!

SilverScar lifted his talons dangerously "both of you are too dangerous to be left alive"

He was about to strike when a giant brownish spike laned in SilverScars neck.