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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
SunnyFox GENERAL PAUL IS HERE and ready to kick Tom's butt woo hoooooo! Paul is actually peak Human even without powers he'd crush Tom. If the shadowy figure went for the real Paul he wouldnt see the light of day again. Also funny reference heh heh. So Emma is going to get her wise advice from Paul who got it from "Ben"? Eh probably not but itd make continuity. (When Emma rejected Michael she gave some wise words from someone named Ben) So now theyre off to the Dark Phoenix Castle, I wonder whats next
Wyvernian its up to you if you want to include Aurora or not in your chapter. it doesnt really matter. Maybe she can stumble upon the PoP cast while eating ice cream or smth dumb. Out of the TAOH cast Ruby has always wanted to be a chef so probably her (Although Neddy likes to join her in her passion) In TROTP Arianna cooks for her family all the time. And will the other characters meet? Yeah sure i dont see why not.
As for the size differences i think we should keep them at their true sizes for now for comical purposes. But then maybe theyll find a special potion or food that shrinks them down? Idk something silly.
Anyway im probably going to do a Dinner Scene with everyone for Chapter 8 is that fine? Then at the end of the chapter theres a doorbell and they go check it out and its Ultimus cast and Hopes Cry cast.
Alright seeya later
Apex, ok that makes sense, I thought they were probably future ultimus characters because I didn’t think you made any human stories before.
Sunny, take all the time you need no rush, your literally writing what 3 stories right now? Your 100% good. Excited to read the chapter!
LLTCCATOT
-Wyvernain
Message to angry Ben, pretty sure our new hater is also disliking PoP and ultimus..
Also, again I say.. disliking our talking tips is what we want so they go away quickly and the achitina prologues and chapter 1s can be seen, so haha jokes on you your only helping!
I legitimately don’t understand why people do stuff like this, the person isn’t actually annoyed by us talking they’re literally just being an annoyance to get us agitated, just for laughs, they’re probably sitting in their bed laughing at us get mad and downvoting everything just to be a nuisance. My advice, ignore them and they’ll get bored and troll somewhere else, that’s what I did with my HoP hater and they just moved on to something or someone else. There’s no making them stop with threats we just need to bore them.
-Wyvernain
from Ben
yes Sunny you are writing the next one sorry should have put that on the last post
Ben and Benjamin are the same people. Benjamin is just my full name. Think of him as like.. an alter ego? If you noticed Ben is short for Benjamin.
GhostGamer, you are approved by me. Once youre approved by the rest of the council, youre probably gonna write either Chapter 6 (if PrimalApex still isnt ready) or Chapter 7.
From Ben
Sunny when a gun is aimed at your head, you honestly have only two choices. LOLZ, i wouldnt wanna die either. Thanks for reading 57 PrimalApex and Sunny.
I read Chapter 1, and Jack is right, has Jay once considered how Jack felt? Why would he ever let his siblings die on his own accord? Playing the blame game is never a good idea guys. And Jay needs to think to himself: am i blaming him because of the grief of losing Jaquin and Josephina, or am i blaming him because I dont want to be at fault? Theyre both at fault for this all. Amen.
Yeah, I hope Jack cheers up soon. Things WILL get better!
Alright, anyway, i guess i gotta work on TOT since im home.
TOT
heh heh, it looks like a crying emoji
TOT
From Ben
Lolz i just saw a more recent comment on Hati and Skoll asking for 2000 likes on their story in Overseer 😭😭
its definitely above the average "fanfic" length, but certainly not the best. Definitely does not warrant 2000 likes. Length does not equate greatness, and like count does not equate quality. A writer could get 10 likes on a below average story, and another could get 3 likes on an above average story.
If i had to rate this story, it would be like a 60% since theres no character depth. I also love it when newbie writers ask for like ten likes for Episode 2 when their story is actual slop that took a few minutes to put together. Put a bit more effort in your story before you ask for likes, am i right?
Okay PrimalApex so if you need more time on Ultimus thats fine. Ill write Chapter 4 then? Also I read Ultimus Chap 6 it was really nice how Andrew was listing off names suggested by Rue first. I guess his best friends on his mind first. And Reuben is like Rue, but, with ben at the end so he must care right right? Also i reread the Prologue and i think i noticed a change, Andrew speaks Japanese? Maybe he meets a Japanese person?
Im trying to deny the fact that Reubens going to die, but, hey im holding onto that hope.
Journey Chapter 4 was also really cool, and something tells me Forest is really far from home... i wonder where he landed, The Island? Guess we'll have to wait and see.
Ok laters guys
From Ben
Wyvernian i think the villains of your cast should still go to the floating mansion, but as they intertwine with the other cast they could be like "man this sucks i need me some real villainous stuff, these guys are too good" so they leave the mansion and just start wandering ariund looking for other bad guys.
100% agree with that Ben, that’s all I meant was that we just need to know they won’t be stupid, and I don’t think syl will be, seal of approval from me 🦭
And ok, I didn’t see Apex saying that thx for telling me, I didn’t know if he was gonna use characters from his older stories or not so it makes sense that if he’s using ultimus characters that he’d wait. Exited for the prologue, also we should make anyone who died and is coming back in the crossover wake up in shock because it makes sense.
-Wyvernain
Ok. I do have a few questions tho about the crossover.
1. Where will the crossover be? Like what filter?
2. What order should we go in to write the collab? Like who goes first and who goes next?
3. Will there be a villain? A group of our villains or a new villain?
4. Which characters from each of our stories will be in the crossover or will all our characters be in it?
5. Where will they all meet together when they all get sucked to the alternate universe? Another Ark island? A mysterious place?
Personally I don’t mind whatever y’all pick. I do have one suggestion tho, I think maybe the order that we each write should probably be in alphabetical. So we each go in abc order as to our alias. Idk I was just thinking….whatever y’all want to do is fine with me. Cya around!
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
thanks for reading chap 54z ill prob post chap 55 once i get home. Its been finished since Saturday but i was procastinating on posting it since its so long
and once again im reminded how bad security is at the dyes section. I actually saw that message myself and posted my regards under a alternate alias. I had my doubts but i didnt want to assume since 1. it seemed very legitimate and 2. just in case. It wasnt like other attempts at impersonation that was for sure.
But now looking back at it it had a lot of contradictions... like really the aunt's "newphew" PD is going through stuff amd SHE has to be under surveillance?? First of all this person spelt newphew wrong and 2ndly, nephew is a boy, niece is a girl.
I honestly dont even understand the point of the message, attention? Maybe it was done to stop traffic in Haze Dye since the message claimed PD would stop posting except for the newer chapters (if PD isnt going to talk, whats the point of talking in Haze right?) Well im glad the situations resolved now.
With info regarding the crossover:
Okay so Wyvernian if you dont want to join the crossover yet thats fine. Personally i dont see the issue in the talking animals thing, because 1. in Sunny's series TROTP talking animals canonically exist, and 2. remember that Caesar can communicate with humans since he has an implant. Regardless, you may join whenever you feel ready to, its all for fun anyway and it doesnt need to follow the rules of the original story. PS: I read 42 and it was a lot of fun Queen Cinder is a really cool character, i almost expected her to team up with Caesar, but what Caesar did wasnt very nice.
Sunny im thinking the crossover is kind of its own thing. Or story if you will. It seems ambitious and time consuming but once again i dont expect this series to be regularly worked on. We can all take turns working on the next chapter and so, kind if like the collab youre working on Fires and Fangs. So to answer your questions its basically its own short story.
psss if you made it this far, say ICUP out loud
Sunny, TAOH will probably be one of the last Ark related books I make for a while. There is another one I have always wanted to remaster, but I have to focus on some of my other projects (if any of you are interested in something non-ark). I'm still going to stick around as a reader though, i wont just throw away all the friendships i made after i finish TAOH!
- Ben
Sunnyfox, I have a theory about Cyrus and his possible power(everyone’s probably hating me for these theories)!!! But I’m not going to say it. I don’t want to be right and spoil anything for anyone else if I am right. I already feel guilty for the last two I did. I am gonna give a hint though to my theory if you’re okay with that.
Something minor isn’t as it seems. Details are strange and confusing, but add them together and things become clear. Look Closer… The Truth is Ou-
“I’m not going to say that!!”
“Why not, it’s funny. It fits perfectly with your hint on what the theory.”
PrimalApex turns around from his chair and see one of his characters, a small creature with toe claws yet to be determined by his audience.
“This isn’t an X-File, it’s a hint to my theory for TDP.”
“You have no sense of humor Primal.”
“And you shouldn’t exist outside of Journey.”
“No Wai-“
But it was too late... (No fictional characters were hurt in the making of this)
Did anyone else have any trouble with Dododex last night?
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Wyvernian, I read chapter 40 & 41!!!!! Is Skyla alive!?! What could’ve happened to her? And where could Alfred be?! Hmm, Khar has no record or reason why he was in prison. Now that could either mean he was imprisoned wrongfully and they knew that at the time, or he’s extremely dangerous, so dangerous it was imperative to keep him secretly imprisoned. I enjoyed both chapters!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)