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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Sylveevee, Chapter 45 of TOT was very cool even though it was short! I already listed some advice on Fandom so I’m not going to go over it again. Anyway, I can’t wait to see what Moon does for Chapter 46 of TOT!
PrimalApex, I loved Chapter 16 of Ultimus! After everything Andrew went through it’s so sad he’s felt the way he has toward the Corrupted Raptors. They don’t even have emotions, yet Andrew still feels bad for trying to kill them. And OMG it’s Freya! She saved Andrew! That’s what Andrew meant in The Omega Timeline when he said that they saved his life and that meant they’re friends! It’s all coming together now. And Paul is here too just like predicted from TOT! It’s honestly so cool finally seeing these characters teased in TOT finally appear in Ultimus after like quite a moment. Although I wonder where Sylas is. I’m guessing he’s waiting back at a camp they may have set up because he can’t fight. After all I’m pretty sure they ascended together from what I’ve read in TOT. Anyway it was an amazing chapter and even moreso the fact that Andrew doesn’t have an implant, so he can’t understand Freya. It’s definitely going to be difficult to communicate between those two, he’ll probably need the others’ help if they know how to speak English. Overall it was an amazing chapter and I loved it!
Ultimus Chapter 16 has been released in Liopleurodon after many concussions later!!! I hope you all enjoy it!!! Also I am leaving for a couple days for my first Camp trip tomorrow afternoon!!! I’ll be back ASAP!!! I can’t wait to see what all happened!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sunnyfox, Glad to see your back or I guess we’re just lurking about!! There have been a few things you missed but I’m sure you’ll speed through it all!!! Also I hope you enjoy chapter 43 of TOT!! I can’t wait to see what MGG has!! And I can’t wait for the next TLW chapter and LS chapter!!
Moon, Pandora Chapter 8 was Awesome!!!!! I loved it so much!! Hm, I wonder if that was a nightmare or an element vision. Curious, and Izzabee has finally reached Bria and Pandora to have them meet King Toxin!! Ooooh!!! I can’t wait to see that!!! I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Wyvernian!! LoP sooo soon!!!!! Eeeeeee!!!! It was AWESOME!!! I love that the mantises are like their lore counterparts on intelligence!!! And I’m loving Ras and Wretch!!!! Nooo!!!! They got caught!! Hm, I wonder who they found out there? Ooh, lore on Ryker!!! I loved it!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Wyvernian, Chapter 8 was awesome!!!!!! I love Wretch now!!! Even though he isn’t a spider anymore. Oh, so there goes one of my theories that Grizzly was a Gigantopithecus, oh well. Surprising that the humans save his butt. I wonder if he did anything for that issue of having six legs now? Hm… I can’t wait to see Salizar’s reaction to Phasma’s transformation from drinking the blood!!! I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t for the next chapter!!!
Moon, Chapter 4 of Clans was awesome!!!! So Thunder was the one who KO’d Hollow!! I wonder if Tail’s and Finch’s journey attracted any unwanted attention? I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Clans Chapter 4 is out! Thank goodness, but also very angry because it wouldn't let me submit the chapter for some time. It told me I was “Asking for skydoots” when in fact I wasn’t and just had the word y’know what (“She looked __ at the sky”) in the chapter a few times. Bruh, I’ve never had this problem before! I had to move and replace every one of those words in the chapter so now it’s not exactly its original self. Welp, hope you guys like it!
—Moon
From Ben
Wyvernian, Chapter 8 of OoS was really cool! The Broodmother fight was swift yet satisfying. The relationship between the hive mind of Araneos and Wretch was a really unique idea and AWESOME. Phasma's new powered abilities after drinking the Broodmother's blood was also cool, since i dont think we got to see it in HoP much. Overall it was a great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens next!
From Ben
Wyvernian, Chapter 7 of TOP was really good! So Count Ghost was the old Count before Count Phasma, but Count Ghost refused his offer, which is why Salizar turned to someone else: Count Phasma, probably because he was the runt and albino, making him more of an outcast and thus powerless in this horde. It’d make sense he’d be willing to take the risk. Also Ryker’s group’s plan involved taking the trophies of all the guardians so that they can ascend. I almost forgot they would need those. I wonder how they’ll succeed in their plan if Apex is a thing. Maybe Apex is a completely different dragon that Salizar created and not the boss version, Apex is the alpha dragon or smth like that. Also the line that states they had “procured the artifacts needed to fight the dragon, as they had already done it dozens of times before,” suggests that they had been through this process a LOT OF TIMES and not just three times as it may have been suggested. They have been ascending off the ARKs trying to find a way to the Earth for a long time. Hmm, hold on. What if they got to Earth through Aberration? That’s why there are two “Aberrations”, because it’s possible that Aberration 01 is the one with Rockwell while Aberration 02 is the one without. Ryker’s group may have made it to Aberration 02 and gotten to Earth safely without having to encounter him. Anyway that was a good chapter. Sad to see Salizar fall so far he won’t even call Phasma a friend.
It’s a very tough and silly platform lolz, but yeah everything Apex said is good advice! Remember there’s always Fandom too Galaxia! If you ever do think about joining that. (Dododex Fan-fiction Wiki is its name, you’ll get it if you search it up.)
Everyone, I am halfway through Clans’ next chapter and am making progress with See and Pandora too, though don’t expect See’s soon lol unless I have some sort of writing breakthrough—
FORGOR TO SAY BUT Apex, the TOT chapter was amazing! Tago saving Andrew was so cool, I loved that. Super excited for MGG’s chapter when he and Sunny get back. That’s it for now!
—Moon
From Ben
Sylveevee I really liked Chapter 32 of QOA! Draconian is a cool character and the dragon wings are a cool power even though it isn’t as strong as the other siblings. I feel like the name is a bit too similar to Draco and might get confusing but i don’t think it matters since Draco got thrown into the dungeon. AND YES WE FINALLY GOT PAUL IN QOA. Now all we need is a Paul somewhere in Fjordur and Pandora Chronicles and that will make the Paul takeover complete… Wolf Syl (that’s what I’m calling her) finding the gem for Paul’s necklace was really neat. I can’t wait to see what Paul’s power is. Anyway that was a fun chapter. Although it’s about time I throw some advice out the window for you:
Try to focus the attention on character interactions and dialogue, and try to make the conversation impactful instead of it being sort of a driver for the plot. Dialogue can be used to express the emotions of the characters. Try to imagine how it is by taking conversations from the real world and placing it in the story. If that makes any sense. Creating memorable moments with dialogue will make the characters even more likable and fun to read about, making it more satisfying to kill them off once you do.
Aberration is not very aberrationy at the moment, maybe you can add some scenes of exploring the map with characters. It would be a great opportunity to introduce new characters or build upon old ones that need more screen time.
I forgot what else i was going to say
Yeah but that’s about it! Good luck and TAKE A BREAK IF YOU WANT TO TAKE ONE
From Ben
Sandmaster, Chapter 24 of Overseer was really great! (I think you mislabeled the chapter btw). Choc the Megatherium nurse seems like such a nice character and I can’t wait to see more of her within Overseer! Gig the Rock Elemental is also pretty cool and I’m guessing he’s probably going to be a mentor-like figure to Fuzzball to help him harness the power of the Whiteout, like Yoda. Makes sense since he’s basically made from magic I suppose. Fuzzball’s dream worries me though, who’s gonna die?! It happens in the snow though. I’m guessing this event will happen much later down the road.
Chapter 2 of Great War of the Biomes was also really good. And oooh so that’s how Eclipse learned about the Tails and joined them, it was through Night. I’m getting a bad feeling about it though because we don’t see Night at all in Overseer. I would worry about Eclipse but we see him in Overseer so… although I wonder what’ll happen to him next.