Hey all

I submitted next chapter BUT WAIT DONT READ CHAP 30 IF IT DOES NOT HAVE A HEADING THAT SAY

creatures of nightmares

Chapter 30 (hehehe I’m excited)

CAUSE I pressed the submit button then I accidentally swiped up, saw some of the writing was gone, and then it submitted!

I did the switch thing to get more space but it was fine after I did that. My internet has been spotty tho..

-DiploLover24

From Ben

Oh yes, by the way, Chapter 55 of TOT is out, so whenever you finish reading it Break-it you can work on 56.

Also, my short story The Arks: Alternative Timeline is finished. Its only 20 chapters long (7 ACTs) amd is a survivor-POV game-style ark story located in Theri. Hope you enjoy!

RelatingHen

Yeah, for some reason, DD 2, The Cold got 7 upcotes. Weird.

---Bob The Survivor---

To: DiploLover

From: Ben, & KM

DiploLover, Chapter 28 of CON was great! That plot twist that the girl human Ripley Jane was a wolf of Ridley’s past was a fun plot twist. The plot twists of CON are really killin’ me here. I’m wondering what made Ridley turn his back on Jane for Adira. Was it manipulation? Or his own will? Ridley is certainly messed up either way, despite his redemption. I also liked the POV of the wolves on Carnivore Island, and I’m wondering how Jane turned into a human, traveled to the Crystal Isles, and why she came back. It seems she’s been used to being a human this whole time. Maybe they’re not the same, and they just have the same name. Anyway CON has been great so far and 29 will be just as awesome.

Break-It, simple. Use Pages, or any other form of document app or website to make your story than copy and paste it to the dex’s Submit Tip.

-PrimalApex:)

To: DiploLover, Break-it, RelatingHen

From: Ben, & KM

DiploLover, Chapter 27 of CON was great! The wolves really did fool the humans. Also it seems that the Yutys are being blackmailed into getting rid of the rest of the wolves. I’m interested to see how this will play out with the rest of the humans and what not. I’ll be around for 28.

Break-it, most of us use Google Docs or just a different app like Notes / Pages or Microsoft Word to write our stories, and then we copy paste it onto the DDEX. So while there isn’t a function on the DDEX itself it’s still the easiest solution. Also, read Chapter 22 and Alfred de Cardo seems like a really cool and formidable villain so far. I’m assuming that this is the villain that will be used for TOT. Anyway, it was cool and I’m glad you’re getting back into SOR.

RelatingHen, Chapters 22 - 24 were pretty good. One thing I’ve noticed though is that Nudon are gonna send in their Gigas to help kill the Titanosaur, which is a fine strategy, but I’ve noticed that Thylas are actually much more effective since they do percentage-based damage. If Sodden gets the final hit in on the Titanosaur though with an explorer note boost, broth of enlightenment, and toilet boost he could probably level up by quite a bit. NeddyTheNoodle used this strategy to speed level on his playthrough of ASE. Anyway I liked the callback to the second chapter of the story near the end of 23, it was pretty cool. Also liked the fight between the Gigas and the Alpha Rex. I’m assuming now that Chapter 25a will be the Titanosaur Showdown, and the rest of the parts will be just the boss battles. One thing that could use some clarity though (and I’ve just realized) are Nudon’s tribemates besides Denine and Red. We know those two are the main people, but there are also others as well. The tribemates don’t have to be major characters, but knowing how many of them there are and who they are could also help add more character interaction and depth, since it feels like there are only 2 people in the Nudon tribe. Not sure about Rod’s tribe, but that could help with his too. I’d suggest doing the same for C Tribe and Nameless too because we only know that Terad and Serenity are members. Anyway, I’ll be around for 25.

Oh, forgot this. Break it, yes you can write chapters without posting them. You can write your chapters on other platforms where you can write stories, like Google Docs, which I use a lot for my chapters.

-RelatingHen8906

To Ben

What are the stories used in ToT? I know there’s characters from TAOH and the obelisk and Queen of Aberration, but what are the others?

-RelatingHen8906

To: RelatingHen

From: Ben, & KM

Well, Relating, Chapter 100 is the only chapter thats reached the limit, which is why its even split up into parts to begin with (it was around 30k words long yikes), though those chapters are indeed just as long. I typically refrain from splitting them into parts for easier reading accessibility. You may have noticed some of TAOH has chapters with A and B, but this was only because i was too lazy to put it all in one or i felt like i didnt want it to cover 2 chapters. Also glad to see another TOT reader, though I wouldnt recommend reading it until you’ve read some of the stories involved in the crossover. I’ll update the TOT page in the Wiki to include it soon.

Also, Chapter 21 of JTAC was great! I thoroughly enjoyed it and the personification of Reaper was nice. I enjoy personified creatures in human POV stories because it adds some spark to the human cast and gives it a bit more variety. I do think the fight between Cordor and the others was a bit underwhelming for a “Showdown” but its no biggie. Just remember to keep that in mind for the finale of Section II. Something that would keep you on the edge of your seat is most likely to keep readers as well. Whether it be something heart-breaking, intense, high-stakes, or gut-wrenching. Also, the continuity error of Cordor being able to go around doing stuff even though he should be low level is noticeable, but can be explained in a future chapter. Other then that, good chapter, i’ll be around for 22.

As for the 7 likes on the chapters, I can confirm there are definitely more than 7 of us. Not all of us are super active here as they were, most are active on the Fandom Wiki. Don’t worry about it too much.

To Ben,

Thanks for your feedback! I’ve gotten started on reading ToT and now I’m hoping that Chapter 54 comes out very soon. Also, yeah, if JTAC happened in real Ark it’d be on a PvX server since the tribes fight each other to ascend so it makes sense they’d go for a Titan.

Also, word limits… bro, Chapter 91b of TAOH and Chapter 40 of ToT were 39 and 38 minutes long!! That’s longer than just one part of the chapter 100. Okay I guess no one would make a chapter like that… unless they, for some reason, really wanted to. Okay just curious: what’s the true word limit on Dododex tips when making a story?

Ok, whatever that’s all for now.

-RelatingHen8906

Thanks RelatingHen!! And also, Chapter One of Fires and the Flood is out in Amargasaurus! Longest chapter yet, 1,144 words!!

-SangToareGirl

Chapter Five of The Five Talons of Abberation is out in Attack Drone! I think they're fliers??

-SangToareGirl

Sorry Break-It for the lack of chapters. I am working on the next chapter as we speak. (it is 54, this will be the finale of this saga. It is NOT the last chapter of ToT. But I am not writing 55. 55 will go onto the next person. Which I think will either be Wyvernian or Sunny if she’s back by then and they’ll kick off the next saga.). If you guys would like, I could release it in two parts and you guys can finally get the first half.

-PrimalApex:)

So um who’s turn is it for TOT?

Break-it The Final Witness

Worlds collide: trailer

It was a nice day. Trikes in the forest. Argys in the sky. But something was off it was a strange presence like the elements were being controlled Henry knew something was off.

If you could not tell my goal with this new series is to mix the world of avatar and ark. Hope you enjoy it!

The reader-

I believe you are mistaken I don’t write king of wyverns, it’s just similar to my name, I write heroes of pandora, I think king of wyverns was.. apex?

-wyvernian

Moon:

Read a world of dinosaurs in electrophrus.

Btw I wrote the Cave Of Secrets in allo if all of you didn't see that. My last tip saying that I did is near the bottom, also, please do not impersonate me, as I have said before. Ik it is probably some little kid bc they sounded immature but I honestly do not like when people try to make a person's reputation drop.

-Lynx

Also feel free to leave feedback about my story! :)

Forest is safe… for now…

😅 It’s ok my friend, the rune will not hurt Forest. That’s not it’s goal at all. The death of that Shadowmane was an accident on the runes part.

While I explained much, I did not explain that this rune has been working for some time… protecting Forest… even if you or Forest did not notice. Have you checked back in the older Chapters? You’ll see things you never did before!

Oh my gosh, I am so glad to hear it's not two chapters until the end of the story. I am excited to learn more about what the rune is truly capable of.

- Apex