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Just for a little tip, try to make the chapters longer, because right now they are kinda short. If you don’t know what to put, try to be descriptive, here’s an example: “the ferox ran across the snow.” If we wanted to make that longer, here’s what it would look like: “the little brown ferox ran across the cold, white snow.” Notice how that makes the sentence longer. I kinda struggle with this, but anyways that’s probably something to try and work on.

-Lamprey

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