The story has now been renamed to an elemental pledge

An elemental pledge chapter 2

Cavern glider dove down towards dawn as she approached the island on the sea of liguid element. Dawn pulled out her cross bow and fired an arrow at one of the rock drakes pushing it back, then cavern glider glided along beside the raveger and lunged forward, but dawn pulled out her pike and stabbed at cavern glider. Cavern glider dodged out of the Way, giving dawn's raveger time to clamber onto the island. Cavern glider's mate reaper diver dove down at dawn, but dawn's raveger jumped away. Several rock drakes dove down towards dawn but despite this dawn's raveger was able to get to the Zipline and start climbing away along the Zipline. Cavern glider jumped off the island towards dawn along side reaper diver. The 2 moved in on dawn as she stabbed at reaper diver with her pike, reaper diver slowed down to avoid the blow. Cavern glider lunged at dawn, too close to use her pike properly, dawn whirled her pike and hit cavern glider with the shaft. Despite being briefly stunned cavern glider grabbed the pike and threw it down into the molten element below. Dawn's raveger jumped onto the spine with cavern glider and reaper diver in hot pursuit. Dawn fired a arrow at cavern glider slowing her down just enough for her raveger to climb on to the Zipline and began to climb up the second last Zipline. Reaper glider jumped after her and bit her raveger in the leg. But in doing so he left himself open to dawn and with a resounding twang she fired her cross bow. The shot hit home, and reaper diver's lifeless body fell into the molten element below, but her triumph was short lived. With a cry of rage and agony cavern glider threw herself at dawn in a explosion of fur and feathers. The raveger fought back fiercely but in her rage cavern glider struck a fatal blow, using the last of it's strength the raveger threw dawn to the ledge, one Zipline away from safety. Cavern glider climbed up after her. Cavern glider before fallin lunged forward and bit down inchs away from dawn's neck. Dawn rolled sideways and cavern glider bit dawn in the leg ripping out a chunk of flesh, dawn screamed in agony, then cavern glider struck dawn with her claw. Cavern glider prepared to finish her off but dawn had one last trick: a flashbang. Dawn grabbed it, throwing it at the ground cavern glider was blinded and the next thing she saw was Dawn gliding away on the Zipline that lead to the Blue zone. Screeching in rage and frustration cavern glider jumped up at dawn but she was out of reach. Cavern glider pushed the chunk of flesh off the ledge and down into the molten element below. Cavern glider vowed that the rest of dawn would follow, she needed revenge for her egg, for reaper diver! ... And if she did not she would go herself!

I hope you enjoyed this it took a lot of work to make but until next time bye!