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Hi Reader! Sorry I’ve been so busy writing that I forgot to respond to you. I’ve also been reading ur story and it’s pretty cool how the dragon is a shapeshifter. I wonder what the black dog is. The grim from Harry Potter? A fenrir? Anyways I hope you’re doing well!
-SunnyFox57
Under the waves: chapter 11
Pearl woke up, her mind fuzzy. She tried to lift her neck, before letting it fall back to the sea floor as a jolt of pain shot through it, and blood billowed into the water. When pearl looked around, she saw a very nervous bright spot near her, and trench was chatting with an unfamiliar megalodon, who was a dark grey with red stripes and a washed out crimson belly. Trench glanced over at her, before turning back to the megalodon. Then he seemed to realize she was awake, because not even a second later he took a double take, joy written all over his face. “Your awake!” He exclaimed. Pearl gave a small smile. “This is crimson. She’s part of the prophecy too.” He explained. “Crimson, this is pearl.” Crimson examined her, from head to tail. “What’s your ability?” She asked. “I.. can call storms. I think.” Pearl responded, remembering when lightning struck the raft. “You?” “I can fight without injury.” Crimson said. Pearl nodded in approval. A fighter would be useful. “What did you do with the mosa?” She asked. Crimson smiled. “I killed it, of course.” “On your own?” Pearl asked, bewildered. Crimson nodded. Then there was a rumbling sound beneath them, and bright spot straight up panicked. “CAN’T WE GET A 𝗦𝗜𝗡𝗚𝗟𝗘 𝗗𝗔𝗬 OF PEACE??” Trench roared over the intensifying rumbling. Then, a giant strange creature burst out of the ground, and it spoke. "✯𓇽༆ 𓇽𖣔᯾᯾⁂ ߷𓇽𖣔𖧷𖣔. ⍟Ꙭ✪۞ ߷𓇽𖣔 ᯾☼߷. ߷𓇽𖣔 𖣔✪۞ ⁂⍟ ༆ ⁂༄ 𖧷 ᪥༄𖣔߷ Ꙭ ☼⌘𖧷⁂☼✫𓇽Ꙭ✪𖣘." Then, it was gone, disappeared into a cloud of sand.
Reader, sorry that I haven’t been replying back in this section to you. I have been responding every so often to you in Achatina. I enjoy your stories very much and I’m keeping up with them!!!! I’m sorry that I haven’t been responding in here to you. Also you might want to use quotation marks as Ben said, it makes the dialogue clear and easy to read. Keep up with your story!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Sorry for not checking in for a while Reader! I saw your message in Snail so I headed over here and managed to read the rest of Season 2 (that youve made so far). While it is short there is a lot to uncover! First of all the Land of the Dreaded sounds so cool. Now Snow has to survive in an Unfamiliar land with only an Unfamiliar friend, Bard by his side. The Araneo of Scribes sounds cool, and so does the shapeshifting dragon! I hope we see more of them in the future. Although I think quotation marks for dialogue need to be added again. Dont forget about that!
Ill read the next chapter as soon as it comes out!
A world of dinosaurs unfamiliar chapter 9
Snow come on hurry up I know what that glow is. The glow started forming an orb the orb grew spikes and spun super fast. But then the spikes formed together making something like that of a mouth. It was getting bulgier. And some spikes were shooting out uncontrollably.
Then the blob formed long and the spikes went on top forming head, arms, and toes. I am the dragon I can take many shapes I am a shapeshifter. Bard I will let you live but only because he is with you if you remember me.
You’re going to have a long journey ahead of you so get to it.
Hi guys!
The reader
A world of dinosaurs unfamiliar chapter 8
Snow opened his eyes bard was fighting a dinosaur. He couldn’t tell it was still fuzzy. Then the animal blurred into view. A chalitherium! Get over here and help fight!
Ordered Bard, dodging a huge rock. Snow ran as fast as he could and into the chalitherium knocking it backward but the chalitherium got back up picked up snow by the tail and threw him in the tree.
Snow fell down and whimpered sitting there. But he shook off the pain, and leaped and bit the chalitheriums neck killing it instantly. But what was odd about it there a red glow.
It wasn’t rare flower though. Bard come over here and look at the red glow around him. Bard studied the glow and then stumbled. Snow get away.
Hope you guys like it.
The reader
The tale of the shadow phoenixes
Chapter twenty two.
Cole and Arianna sat at a table at the edge of the forest. They ate their food in awkward silence then just sat there awkwardly. Arianna stared off into the distance, her slim hand laying on the middle of the table. Cole stared at it and was considering takin it into his hands, although bold it seemed. Although they had only known each other for a few months, Cole knew he loved Arianna but did she love him back? He reached for her hand but she moved it. He covered it up by scratching his head.
Arianna felt awkward. First of all she couldn’t understand why in the first place she had agreed to go out with Cole. Sure she liked him…as a friend but nothing more than that. But she knew that Cole liked her more than friends and wanted a relationship more than just friends and..that scared Arianna. But she had trouble saying no to people especially people who were very nice. Oh, Cole why do you have to make friendship so difficult?
Finally the evening ended and Cole walked Arianna home. “Thanks Cole.” Arianna said softly. “Uh…you’re welcome. So…there’s a ice skating thing for the teenagers, would you like to go with me?” Cole asked, a hopeful look on his face. “Um..sorry Cole but I can’t skate and…I have other plans. But I’ll see you around!” Arianna said. Cole looked disappointed. “Oh ok.” She shut the door and headed to her room after bidding her parents goodnight. She hadn’t told Cole but she had also scheduled a music lesson with James, but for some reason she didn’t feel like informing Cole about it.
Sorry this chapter was short.
-SunnyFox57.
A world of dinosaurs unfamiliar chapter 7
Bard I have something to tell you. I’ve been having these dreams and I’ve actually seen the thing in it. It’s this big black dog about twice as big as me. But once I followed the trail through the woods and I saw it. Snow watch out!
Waking up groggily snow looked around what what happened.
The reader
Protectors or Pandora
Chapter 24 ~
Caesar and Jaxz headed back to the mouth of the cave along with the jerboa and the morelotops, they were in a rush to get there and back before the magmasaurs attacked. They eventually reached the caves entrance and the jerboa and morelotops stood in shock and awe of the massive giganotosaurus, “you were definitely right about the extra supplies…” the jerboa said, and the morelotops nodded, “it’s not gonna eat us.. right?” The morelotops asked, “no he’s harmless.. ish… you know what be careful..” Caesar said.
The two creatures carefully tended to bones’ burns once bones stirred in his sleep and the morelotops almost feinted, “his wound runs deep.. he may never see out of his left eye again…” the jerboa said gravely.
Bones eventually woke up and stood up, he blinked his eyes a few times but it hurt to blink his left, he realized he could barely see out of his left eye and said “what.. happened to me…” “you didn’t get in the cave fast enough.. a beam of light streaked across your face and down to your tail, unfortunately you may never be able to see out of that eye properly again..” the jerboa said sadly. “What?! I- …” Bones said, he looked around trying to focus his eye but he couldn’t, he stormed off down the cave ignoring the calls of his friends. “He’ll be alright, he just needs time. What are we going to do about the invasion.” The chief said, “the creatures of the oasis have a plan, apparently this is a normal thing.” Caesar said, “how normal?” The chief asked, “enough they have war buckets.”