From Ben on the other computer

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From Ben on the other computer

For any wonderin I’m already talking with Lamprey, it’s pretty nice so far talking

PrimalApex Chapter 13 was great! So Nightfall chose to resign on his own, but obviously they don’t want leaked secrets so they’re gonna kill him?? Right, that seems fair enough.. But the Order really knows about the Five too? They might be really powerful if that’s the case. Does their influence spread across other ARKs too besides The Island? And what was that sound at the end? Maybe the Rhyniognatha’s attention got attracted from all the bickering?

Sylveevee I really liked TOT Chapter 26! It’s a little sad Queen Syl has to go through such measures to gain the trust of Aragorn and his family.. Hopefully she realizes that if she’s more honest and puts more effort into building a bond between the both of the groups they’ll succeed. Also the abstracting Milo part was great.

For future chapters I think it’d make sense everyone is that certain files take longer times to abstract than others. That’s why Rockwell and Apex could not come in at the same time because both of their files are large (Rockwell’s like the second largest creature and Apex is like fourth). Power levels and strength are also taken into account as well. So some average joe like Lil Jack will be brought in immediately, while Apex may take an hour to bring in because he’s so large. That also may be why Rockwell is brought in as human and not his element corrupted form.

That’s all for now, seeya around

PS: I’m almost done with revisions of the TAOH chapters so Chapter 66 will come out sooner or later

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