Moon, your story is interesting and it reminds me very much of arc 1 wings of fire, with your prophecy and five main juvenile characters or something. I don’t know, just gives me that feeling. Overall it’s a great story and I do hope you keep writing this! Sometimes I can’t find it no matter how far I scroll on the tamable creatures but I just google it so it’s fine. -Skleam
Open the Dododex app on iOS or Android, select a creature, and go to Tips > Submit Tip.
BoXXy,
I am new to this community as well, but I’m just a viewer and not an author.
I will be more than happy to support your stories!
If you ever feel discouraged or feel like you “suck” at storytelling, let me give you advice:
We all sucked at something once, but it’s the ones that kept going forward that turned out to be experts at the subject.
-SomeGamerGuy, a silksong player.
Chapter 4 for dwellings might come a bit late.. stuff happens ya know? Also Im big on gaming so I’ve been occupied with that too (mostly ark and mortal kombat idk why I’m telling you this) might be write in a day might write in a week or 2 I just don’t know rn I’m also trying to animate some drawings right now so I’ve got lots I want to do ✌️-DeeZBeanZ/BoxxY
once the two jerboas eyes had adjusted, the female jerboa, Nova, made her way to her nest, and curled up in it, the male, Destiny, sat in the corner, glaring at Nova, "Nova-"
"No Destiny, im going to sleep! i dont want to talk about it."
Destiny scoffed, curled up in his nest, closed his eyes, and succumbed to the nighttime visions, or as humans say, Dreams. Destiny woke at sunrise, cold rain pouring outside, glittering as the sun reflected on them, Destiny sniffed the air for any sign of predators, but the rain made it harder for him to scent anything but salty water and wet tree bark, Nova was still asleep when a loud Thump’ thundered outside the den and Nova was startled awake, “What was tha-” Nova started but Destiny cut her off with a sharp Shush, something was trying to dig into their den, and it was hungry.
- DeeZBeanZ/BoXXy
Haha.. yea I knew I said the second chapter would make more sense but uh…haha 😅 I like confused readers Ig… hope you enjoyed! I did COMPLETELY CHANGE THEIR NAMES! But it’s actually because of something later in the story that ties to it so it’s not random k? Alr, Hope you enjoyed! Have a Good Day/Night! Stay calm! Please don’t overwork yourself! And DONT GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS!!
To Ben from BoXXy:
Awww Mann.. it’s been like 2-3 years since that old corny name.. and my old corny story’s.. and horrible grammar! I totally ghosted Dododex back then.. 😅 funny to see you remember me though! I as just thinking about how I used to write and saw all my old tips and stuff, and remembering how you tipped me and my sister cheesecake! Man.,. It sure has been awhile! I’ve been loving writing to myself so I thought I might come and check if this community is still alive, happy to see it is and happy to redo and finish some of my old stories!
DeeZBeanZ again! Just wanted to make sure that whoever saw that I was writing here knows it might be a bit I’m super busy rn in IRL and in ark (just hatched my new magmasaur on default settings so that’s a doozy) and I wanted to make sure I didn’t lead someone to think that when I said I’ll write soon I didn’t mean in a day or two might be a bit but I’m trying to take my time with it! Hope all y’all readers and writers are having a good day/night! Bye ✌️
