What if tyrana had a plan to become unstoppable with a army of mutated giga. She worked to mutate rexes and 5 fall in the pit to fight Goliath. 3-5 at least and also I have a vote for “ wrecker may still be changing” he grow wings. It’s absolutely up to you. Also I think the final fight could be at the castle

WOOOHOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! VIOLENCE!

-Apex

I think I could make him more violent, but I don’t want to. Maybe in the next chapter.

-Lamprey

I feel like I overreacted a bit, I read it pretty late, but don’t rewrite it, I’ll interpret it different so it makes more sense.

-Lamprey

Okay now bloodthirsty Apex is sadistic Apex.

-Apex

Bloodthirsty apex seems more like sadistic apex, seeing that bloodthirsty apex enjoys seeing things die and suffer.

-Lamprey

I like how you’ve made Goliath probably more brutal than in my chapters, mmmmmmmmmm brutality and gore…. VIOLENCE IS SOOOOOOOOOO FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry, I must remain CALM, I’ve nearly watched all the movies on that list, sooooooo I’m pretty excited to watch the worst ones…

-Apex

Just so that I don’t sound picky with how it’s made, it’s just the wyvern trench part that was unrealistic, and it’s the only part that should be changed, looking at it from a logical way, Tyrana could throw a few rexes in to the trench to distract the wyverns, and then once Tyrana takes 1-2 eggs (maybe a 3 if the creature she’s riding holds an egg) and after she grabs the eggs, a few female wyverns notice and chase Tyrana back to her castle or whatever it is, and then Tyrana ends up trapping them. Just a few ideas to make it more realistic.

-Lamprey

Lava, I need you to rewrite chapter 3 of Tyrana, because it is WAY too unrealistic with the wyverns. “They threw wrecker in and Tyrana took 10 eggs” First off, wrecker would definitely be dead due to the amount of wyverns (keep in mind that they are also intelligent, so they would probably take high ground and shoot blobs of poison and beams of electricity at him) and second, how does Tyrana take 10 eggs? Whatever she’s using is going to be slowed down purely by weight, and then Tyrana and her creature are straight up dead, period. Taking three female wyverns could work, but you’d probably have to make it sneaky, and also Goliath is currently in the pit. Honestly this chapter needs some

HUGE changes and more thinking, because this isn’t even possible. Also don’t even try to bring up “But this is realistic Ark!” because realistically you could only get 1 or 2 eggs at a time.

-Lamprey

Jeeeeez…. Patience….

Tips take a day maybe even 2 to post, you must wait patiently for replies….

-Calm Apex

Ok Bloodthirsty Apex is coming out.

Lamprey: ‘Says Wrecker will be in pain from ascending’

Me: Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm pain………

WOOHOOO PAIN AND SUFFERING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (In Duffman voice) OH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-BLOODTHIRSTY APEX!!!!!!!!!!!

I imagine Wrecker did ascend, otherwise the story wouldn’t continue very well lol.

Also…

PIT FIGHT PIT FIGHT PIT FIGHT PIT FIGHT PIT FIGHT PIT FIGHT PIT FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOLIATH GONNA PULL OUT SOME GUTS WOOHOO!!!!!!!

BLOOD IS FUN!!!!!!!

-BLOODTHIRSTY APEX (I HAVE MULTIPLE PERSONALITIES)

Now to continue watching all the movies on the list of 17 disturbing movies that will mess you up,

Wrecker ascended if your using him on SE, and just a tip because element isn’t supposed to be transferred, it would probably be painful for a creature that has been transformed for element, so keep that in mind.

-Lamprey

I mean, the wyverns could grab the same creature that won again and have it fight, not knowing it was the same creature.

-Lamprey

Wrecker is a giga on scorched wandering when tyrana tames it and feeds it a mix between angler gel organic polymer black pearls and a death worm horn. Wrecker also grew a horn on his head because of that. -lava I think that’s good

Look is wrecker ascending or not -lava

Question did wrecker ascend?-lava

I think getting Goliath into the arena to fight creatures could make some good chapters, I’d also like to see how he does while he’s weakened, since he’s in a bad state right now. I don’t think I’ll write the chapter though, you could Lamprey.

Also, a bit about how the arena works in The Wyvern King’s chapter, I feel like creatures that win fights should be kept there to fight more until they’re well, dead. I’m brutal, so I like making things suffer, including Goliath.

-Apex

I think the wyverns should carry Goliath to the trench to fight, but it would take a few, he’s become a bit overweight lol.

-Apex

Should the wyverns carry Goliath to the pit to fight against some dinosaurs, or should the wyverns get him out of the trench and leave him alone until he comes back?

-Lamprey

I skipped last week, but this week I’ll write one. I just had to take a break last week.

-Red Dragon