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I liked the two parts you wrote Lava the Dilo! One thing though: We’re trying to make this fanfiction more like the upcoming Ark Animated Series or the explorer notes instead of the real game, so maybe don’t say the stats of creatures. Also, what’s Tyrana’s backstory? She was captured by Nerva, and probably knew Nerva because she knows his weakness and vice versa, but what else?

-Red Dragon

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