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Hey Doom, finally read your story and I really enjoyed it! Felt a bit strange jumping through random sections like that, but your chapters weren't buried under a bunch of other stuff, so I guess it worked!

One question, what exactly IS The Monarch? Like, what does he look like, because I was just picturing a comical wizard the whole time, lol.

Anyways, great story, seems like it could be a webcomic.

~CL1

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