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I think you should keep "A Lone Howl" at the start of it. Lets people know right off the bat it's associated with the other story.

You see, everytime you say you're "burdened with glorious purpose," it loses its luster just a little bit.

Anyways, I come bringing a truce certificate from the gators. They will agree to let you keep your other hand, so long as you stay off their land (and stop staging dramatic takeovers.)

If you accept the terms, sign here:

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~Classic Lok1 is like the Lorax, but for alligators instead of trees.

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