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That's a great plot idea! Since Alisa is native to Nova, I think it ought to be one of your friends that was captured, since if it was Goon's friend they'd have to ascend to Nova too (and I kinda want Goon to start alone for aome character development ;)

Also, Goon's description: White and black yuty. He's confident as long as there are friends around him. He is timid if he's alone, but vicious with support, and he can be concieted most of the time. Alone, he's serious, with friends he sometimes acts like a child. (His personality is based on yutys ability to ally with other creatures and strengthen them.)

It looks like we've got everything worked out! Just keep in mind, yes we are writing around the set plot, but theres no need to rush it! Take some time to let the reader get to know your character a little.

Now we can finally get to writing. We can both post our prologues, and then do you want to write the first chapter or shall I? Also we're writing in deino, right?

~CL1

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