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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
From Ben
GitezGood, I read Chapter 9 Part 1 of TFoF and the name drop of the story was honestly pretty funny. Also I got the reference of Rodan for the phoenix, from Godzilla. Another one of your tames or made up? Also, him joining the Fleet of Fate because he lost his parents is a good start for character motivations, however, it doesn’t make too much sense yet. I don’t know if you have anything else planned for his backstory, but maybe he has lost his parents to the other Crystal Wyverns, which is why he wants to side with the Tropicals and not the Bloods or Embers. I dunno, maybe you already had that planned. And since Rodan is talking about his late parents I think he could have been a bit more sad saying it. Just try to put yourselves in your character’s shoes (talons I suppose in this case). How would you feel about losing your parents, and then place it in that character (unless the character acts otherwise evil or smth and don’t care about their parents). Alright that’s it hopefully that wasnt too much to digest.
