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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

The next chapter of TLW is out in sarco.

OK, feedback time…*clears throat*

Syl, your draft model ending was very funny to read. Jimmy worked hard to trick his teacher and steal his toy back. I do agree with Ben, I wish that we knew how Jimmy made the replica. There were some grammar issues but other than that it was awesome!

Ben, your draft model ending was fun to read. It really went into depth of how hard Jimmy worked to get his toy back. If I had any complaints it would be that it was a liiitle long but other than that…👍.

MGG, your draft ending was cool! Jimmy wanted his toy so bad that he did EXTRA homework to get it. Some grammatical mistakes were there but it was great!!

Arghhh….this is such a tough decision but I think I will vote for Syl. Syl’s chapter was pretty funny to read and I loved it, mission impossible indeed. So yeah, Sylveevee gets my vote!

Cya later!

-SunnyFox57