Dododex

ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

To: SunnyFox57

From: Ben

SunnyFox57, I was able to read your story Terrible Demise of Tortuga and I like it so far. I think it’s an interesting story, the characters although I don’t like that much besides Aaron and I think Jack and Jay are interesting. What I find most intriguing is why do they not want any newcomers to know about the curfew laws set in place? It seems a bit suspicious that they want their newcomers arrested like that. Something’s definitely fishy business here. At first I didn’t even think this was an Ark FanFic, but after Chapter 1 I was even more intrigued. What exactly is this island? If it’s in the past, then would that be before the events of Ark, or after the events of Ark and the element corruption? I don’t know, I’m sure it’ll be revealed later down the line. However if there’s one thing I’d like, it’s to have paragraphs. It would make it much easier to read. And it’s going to look nicer. That would be pretty nice. Yeah that’s about it. I’m going to read the other stories now.

Cheers!