Shadow ain’t too active anymore, unfortunately :/. So I guess you adopted Melody! How exciting for her, haha.

-HaziHeeler

Sorry all caps lol also I have to type this to submit

I can't even tell if I fav this lol

I’m lava and I just saw your thing so i have been here since late phase 2 (Long time) so A (can I calmly you A for short?)Your stories are gonna want good punctuation and grammar, you want some plot twists and drama. You need characters that you like writing about (cause if you don’t wanna write about it then what is the point) make sure to be creative and think outside the box. Always remember if you need help or inspiration you can read other people stories or ask Another fan fictioner -lava

K, A.Arrii, I’m a fanfictioner who was here since August, I may not be able to give too many good tips, but I’ll try.

For starters, you wanna pick a name that’s kind of descriptive, but also that it gives some level of mystery so people wanna read.

Also, drama, drama is great. No one wants to read a story where everyone lives la-dee-da lives where everything is perfect. They want drama, love, rivalry, villains, and maybe some character death for good measure. Also, you wanna make stories with depth, plot twists, and good characters who people like.

But finally. Write because you like doing it.

I’m out!

-Manticore

A. Arii, this is advice I give everyone:

You write for YOU, first.

What I mean by that is write what you enjoy, not what you think other people want. If you aren't enjoying what you write, you won't stick with it and improve, but if you write the type of story YOU would want to read, you'll find there are other people out there that want to read it too (though sometimes it takes a bit for people to find it.)

Now, if you want to improve your writing, there are a few things you can do.

1. Ask for help (which you're already doing, so good on you.)

No one is a perfect writer, and we all excell in different areas. Some make good plot, some make good action, some do better in other places, and it's alright to admit you can't do it all. Ask other writers for their opinions and suggestions!

2. Read, read, read!

In this case, I would read other stories from dodo dex. We all get inspiration from other people, not just in writing but in everything. If you're struggling with something or need ideas, go look at some other fanfictions!

If you need help writing an action scene, go look for a story with good action writing (Apex is probably your guy for that!). If you need to build plot and need more ideas, look at some stories with big and interesting plots. Look for inspiration everywhere, not just dodo dex. (I got some inspiration for Night-Mare from fairytales!)

3. Keep writing!

Don't give up! When you first start, you may think you suck, but if you keep writing you'll find that you WILL get better. It may take time, but all good things come with practice!

Hope this helped!

~CL1

I wouldn’t call Lolbit a god. Lolbit is more some kind of shadow.

-Manticore

I honestly jave no idea.

-shadow

Heheheheheh, Nergal, I need your help to make some of Lolbit’s agents, disappear.

-Manticore

Why the hell did everybody just become gods???

—Ryukenmaxximus

You really do seem like the God of Bloodshed, Lolbit. Sure, I’ll make an exception.

And Manticore: God of Knowledge works for you. Haha.

- President Loki

Ahhhh, God of Magic? Maybe I’ll be god of knowledge. Or why not both?

-Manticore

I’m the elemental of fire!

“ if you ever cared to ask good for y…”

-lava

OOOOoOooOOoooo, can I be the god of bloodshed?

-Lolbit

*blinks*

Ummmmm, let me check.

*looks through backpack*

Ah, heres some. That'll 1 dollar.

-the shadow scout buissness

Do you have human souls and chocolate chip

-Skeleton

Why are people writing full on stories in the dye tips

Are you going to assassinate me bc you won't succeed

-DX

Did you assassinate me? Because that's your tag. Or are you talking about someone else because I'm still here. 🤔

-DX

Hey Ferrari Finala! ( sorry if I get the tag wrong)

I’m not sure if we “rule” the dyes rather than kinda just use them as our writing space. Silver dye is like the main HQ and is where we all just hang out and such. I hope this post helped!

#FF4L,

Tina