Snow camo for the sneaky ones.

Idk why but I feel like stalker should come back

The remake of chapter 7 seems more like chapter 8, but it’s definitely better.

-Lamprey

Can I just say Goliath is actually quite intelligent and would know that the Ghidorasaurus dummy is fake since he killed the real one, so most likely wouldn’t attack it.

-Apex

I set up Goliath and red battle so get ready to write that.-lava

Also I think after where nerva is right now me and Christopher tie him up and throw him in the ocean. Or we put him in a exploding raft and send him out to ocean

Ima write Christopher and li in my next chapter!

When we do the final battle:

For example

The red pike (last stand)

Nervas story part 1

The red pike (last stand

Tyranas story part 2

The red pike (last stand)

Reds story 3

The red pike (last stand)

Goliaths story part 4

I think that is how we could do the end... except they would think tyrana is a good guy so technically not last stand

The last (last stand part) should go to nerva though when they defeat nerva. Also cl1 thanks for the idea of making everything go wrong

Jedi, I will make this next part of Nerva’s story mostly exposition, searching for clues around Walker’s house. Then he plans an ambush (which you can write), but Walker escapes.

-Red Dragon

Alright our encounter will be my next chapter Jedi, also sorry I've been inactive, I'm taking care of my grandmother. I'll write my next chapter asap.

~CL1

I think the schedule has sort of fallen apart and now we're all just posting any day once a week.

~CL1

Hmmmmm, you can write about the battle between Goliath and Walker.

-Apex

I mean someone’s just downvoted half of the tips here with no particular motivation behind it, also I may start another story that hopefully I won’t cancel.

-Apex

Oh, I forgot to say, I posted part one of the crossover in Stryder yesterday.

-Red Dragon

Ok so who’s just downvoted half of the tips we’ve put in here for no particular reason?

-apex

Yeah my character can tame the others. Makes since to bring them into the main plot. (Love how you just quietly flexed your character lol.)

~CL1

Actually, will I be able to use two characters? I think I might run out of things to write about in the ocean, so I feel like having a bary on land would be good, but that’s only is Red approves of it.

-Lamprey

like this tip if you hate lag

Sure you can be in the crossover.

We really need someone to be a person.

-Apex

Oh god help meh.

DTG has driven me insane...

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I think I like the idea of doing the crossover in different sections. And Seasnake, I think character development on your raptor is a pretty good idea. I’m not really sure how I can do character development on a villain, except turning good but that’s not happening. I can be on Saturday for my day BTW. New person, sure, you can join the crossover. I would recommend getting a fanfiction nickname too!

-Red Dragon

Here’s a bit more info about my character:

Goliath is an unknown species of creature who lives on the Island. He lives in the redwoods but has had loads of adventures outside of the redwoods. He’s a vicious hunter, everything is prey. He is often thought of as a myth and has many names, including diplo hunter, bronto killer, Rex predator, giga slayer and The King of the Island. Nobody is completely sure wether or not he even exists, most who try to find him never come back, the ones who had have been driven mad and either isolated themselves or committed suicide. However, Goliath would soon be discovered by the crossover characters in the crossover.

When it comes out.

Which should be soon.

I really think we should do it next week.

Who else does????

Anybody?

Help meh.

I’m losing ma mind...

-AAAAAAAPPPPPEEEEEEEXXXXXX

AKA

-Apex

AKA

-Xepa

AKA

Ummmm idk.

-Apex