As proud as I am of all my stories, personally I thought Rorin’s Story could have been better, but then again, I think that about all my stories, I guess there’s always room for improvement.

And yes, Ally is just dumb. Here’s a fun fact, Ally was actually based off a sarco me and my sister tamed on the island on our first ark world. The sarco was our second sarco we’d tamed, and we’d decided to name it Ally, or at least, I did, because it was deemed my sarco. Ally was rather stupid and tended to not listen to our commands, which was very annoying. Ally is also based of a argent we’d attempted to get. We had a pure white argent, and a gold-ish one. We wanted to get a white and gold argent, but the two argents where both female. Basically, my favorite argent, Pheonix did a lot of breeding for nothing.

Also Pheonix along with the white argent were both in Ally’s Hope.

-WhiteWinterTiger