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PrimalApex, Chapter 10 was interesting. Who could this creature be? And why was he trying to get to Fjordur? What did he mean by the fact that he’s free now? Well I hope he doesn’t do to much damage in the Redwoods, that’s where the Terror Bird Empire is, right? Hey, maybe we’ll see the Terror Birds or Bramble again. Maybe we’ll see more perspective in Fjordur in the future.

Sylveevee, Chapter 17 was great! I’m glad my tip worked for you. What a plot twist, I did not expect that at all! But I’m so glad Cooper is alive, and he’s getting super strong too, he might be one of the most powerful people in QOA at the moment, if he still has two more powers to go… Overall, a really good chapter. Drake’s feelings were used very well in this chapter following Cooper’s “death”, and I really liked it. But man, I feel bad for Blue. Ten children!

Sunny, I really enjoyed Chapter 22 and 23! So Cole is going to hide it out and work for nobody. Honestly, I don’t blame him at all, that’s a smart move on his part. Also THATs what happened to River Bend… yeah, I dont think Jack can visit it any time soon. I hope Peter and the rest of Cole’s family survived the attack, but, probably not :( RIP. TBH that chapter I almost expected an Among Us reference LOL. “There’s a spy among us, we need to find him,” XD. And Cole what in the world are you doing with that picture… Creepster. Hopefully he stops doing that, sheesh. Youre just as bad as Michael (well, not as bad, at least you didnt kill people, but you might since youre just a DIRTY SPY).

And the Shadowy Figure is being crazy again as always. Hmm, Jack seems familiar to him. Yeah it’s probably Aaron. If it was Aragorn, he’d be way more familiar to him since it’s his own son. Yeah, he’s all corrupted and whatever and maybe if it’s Aragorn he’s gone so mad he can’t even recognize his own son, but, you know what this seems like the most viable option of it being AAaron.

Anyway, good job everyone. Seeya around!

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