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Ben, chapter 9 was great, I only have two issues, 1, nobody ever asked about the giant bat in a coma on the couch 😂(we can just say he’s on a couch decently far from everyone else, it’s a mansion.) And 2 Darkhide was a bit to feisty, he’s more quiet, but the accusation about poison makes sense and him and Emeralds distrust about humans was spot on, because they only ever knew about Olympus humans and those guys were kinda like Nerva’s tribe (brain fart, it’s new legion right?) from the explorer notes. Emeralds commanding nature and distrustful attitude was spot on and you got Sheeri’s timidness really well, Nova doesn’t really have too much character depth yet so you couldn’t really get her wrong but I kinda see her as energetic and pretty optimistic and brave. So nailed it.
Also Darkhide doesn’t actually want to eat them, it was kinda a joke, it’s been fine so far I just don’t want it to become a main thing for him to constantly say they should eat everyone. Also he’s probably gonna be pretty paranoid about dangerous situations, and betrayal, since he was betrayed so often in his life. (by Salizar and his own people, but we’ll have to get farther in before I explain that… I see a very nice character arc in play…)
Anyway excited to read chapter 10, and write chapter 11, um should syl’s characters show up in chapter 10 since in chapter 8 they were already at the door basically? And then in Apex’s chapter he could have his and Mrghosts characters meet at the bottom of the stairs and then Mrghost’s chapter (or maybe the later part of Apex’s chapter can be everyone together.) and then maybe they should split into smaller groups in MrGhosts chapter because this is like 30 characters. It’s a lot to keep track of. If we are splitting into groups I think we’ll have to decide which of our characters team up. And we can explain them splitting up as like they are trying to figure out what’s happening so they split up.
If we do split up I think my characters should team up with MrGhosts because they’d feel more comfortable traveling with other creatures, and we both have villains so maybe our characters could be trying to find where Drain, Yang and Steve went. (Steve was a villain right? He went on Yangs shoulder.) anyway enough rambling from me I’m gonna go write the next PoP chapter.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Wyvernian Chapter 47 was really funny! The Anky boss would probably get along really well with Lagoon. Anyway, it was that easy? Well i dont believe it, something fishy is at play here.. and Ping and Richard are still hurt. Bad. Thats not good.
Hopefully nothing bad happens to them or Alfred.
From Ben
Wait no longer cuz Chap 9 of TOT is out already. And I liked Chap 8 Sylveevee!
LLTCCATOT
With info regarding TOT heres how i think the other casts will be introduced, judging from their chapters.
Sylveevee's cast will be rung in with the others at the end of Wyvernian's chapter.
MGG and PrimalApex's cast will meet in PrimalApex's chapter, and MGG can detail them like entering mansion and stuff.
Anyway, PrimalApex I really liked the latest chapters of Journey and Ultimus! So the creature was a Troodon.. cool! I forgot what i predicted it to be. But this Troodons a bit freaky cuz it knows about other ARKs and Fjordur's great prophecy? This is already turning to be an interesting character. And Ultimus, WOW thats gonna make things harder for Andrew. I guess his parents forgot to consider that before heading off to Arat Prime.. welp sucks to be Andrew. But since he has a while to go hes probably gonna meet other survivors along the way, right?
Also I feel like the dragon roar on TV at the beginning is gonna foreshadow the Titans... Nice work ok seeya later
Apex, read the newest chapters of ultimus and journey, they were really good, so Forest somehow transferred himself to the island? Are the other five there too or did they get sent to other arks? Hmm.
Also Sunny, of course imposters aren’t allowed 😂 but that won’t exactly stop them.. because.. imposters…
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Yes.. i dont think anyone here is in favor of impersonators or haters working on TOT. Also if youre talking about "Chapter 8" of TOT i made that post since Syl's Chap 7.5 should technically be 8
PrimalApex, Jerry is extremely deranged for sure he's kinda fun to write. I wouldnt mind putting him in TOT in the future. But he does have his own backstory which explains his mentality of the world.
Ben, I read chapter 59!!!! Jerry seems perfectly deranged… he definitely got what he deserved from Loki!!! But I think Bob and Alan are going to have some trouble!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
MrGhostGamer, I read chapter 7 of ToT!!! I really enjoyed it!!!! Ebenezer Scrooge is in The Omega Timeline!!! Well that’s interesting!!!!
Sunnyfox, Sorry about that, I keep forgetting which one is for which use. Thank You!!!
Sylveevee, I read chapter 7.5 of ToT!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!
Angel, It isn’t that easy for me to write these chapters. While a take a few hours to write a chapter. Those hours can span across days for me because I like to think out what I want to happen and how everything will work with future events and previous events.
Also Ultimus Chapter 8 and Chapter 6 part two of Journey have been Released!!!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
MrGhost, chapter 7 was good, on thing though, and I hate to be that guy but too is not the correct word to use, “too” is like “I want to go too.” As in “I want to go also.” “to” means like I want to go to the store.” As in “I want to go there.” (To the store)
Basically to is for action. too is for you agreeing with someone like “I want to too.”
Ben, the only reason I don’t want to do .5 chapters is it gets confusing, especially since every chapter is in Yi Ling. Like what if someone is trying to read it and they skip from 7 to 8 and forget 7.5 and then get confused.
Ok that’s all for now.
LLTCCATOT
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Rest in peace Barnacle, you died so that the main characters could live to see another day 😔 Wyvernian Chapter 46 was awesome! That scene reminded me a lot about the swamp scene in the Ark Animated Series, except, with bloodstalkers. Awesome stuff and i thibk youll be writing Chapter 5 of TOT.
Sunny you absolutely NAILED it with ToT Chapter 4, thats pretty much exactly how Neddy and Ruby act, look like, Everything about them is like 100% accurate. I really liked that chapter nice work. Cant wait to see the rest of them mingle.
Also Chapter 6 and 7 should be intro chapters like Prologue, Chapter 1, and Chapter 2 so that means you can work on those chapters PrimalApex and MrGhostGamer while 5 is in development by Wyvernian.
MGG please send the list of characters youll use in TOT here in Achatina thanks
So Slyl is writing the next chapter? Is it eight or seven and a half? I’m confused. I don’t really think it matters which number chapter we get, we’re writing this story for fun. But if y’all want to write a certain chapter then that’s fine, we’ll figure out. Anyways.. cya later!
-SunnyFox57
P.S: Btw when y’all say something like “they tried in vain to do something” it’s spelled “V-A-I-N” not “V-E-I-N”. A vein is a part of the body. No offense, I was just explaining.
From Ben
Syl you dont have to end your story or rename it everything we write is non-canon to our stories so it shouldnt affect your story at all
honestly it depends for me on how long it takes to write a chapter. I write all parts for a single chapter at once, i just release it seperately because of the word limit. On good days i can pump out a 1k words per hour. On bad days it slows down. depends if im procastinating or not.
I only wanted to write Chapter 13 for superstious reasons. Pretty weird i know but its been like that since 2020zz given me lots of good luck. But now i just went for a walk so i dont care about writing Chap 13 anymore
So Sylveevee you will write Chapter 8
I will write 9
Sunny: 10
Wyvernian: 11
PrimalApex: 12
MGG: 13
Syl: 14
Ben: 15
etc.
yeah we're chillingp
Sylveevee
So in the omega timeline your characters are like clones or doubles of your normal characters, so no they can’t get back to your story and the original versions of your characters from your story don’t remember the omega timeline because they weren’t really actually there, it’s kind of like multiversal doppelgängers of your characters (if you know what I mean) so ya they can have the abilities and everything of the normal characters and there can also be a location from your story in the merged land, you mentioned a castle. And as for when you write it’s kinda like a relay race where we go in an order of who joined first so Ben, Sunnyfox, me, primalapex, Mrghostgamer, you. and so on. Idk why Ben says you’ll write 7.5 so he will write 13.. I’ll ask because I don’t know why he doesn’t just write 14. And also he won’t land on 13 anyway Mrghost will..