From Ben

Ye Wyvernian ik it supposed to be a "villain" obelisk but i kinda forgor about that sorry. But the way to find the white obelisk is really genius!

Sylveevee, Chapter 16 was amazing, I loved it! So Pat has teamed up with the leader of the rebel raiders, Carnilius. Very cool name, is he going to show up in a future chapter? Because he didnt show up in Part 5. You also did a good job conveying Moonhigh and Sunhigh's feelings in Part 2. And woah, we get more backstory. So Syl and Draco have known each other since the Island? Really cool. Although one thing? You dont have to put in parentheses that Syl used to have anger issues in SE, because a good reader can tell that by reading the dialogue and action and stuff. Anyway Part 3 really does explain why Syl and Draco seemed to know each other in Chapter 13.

Anyway, Part 4 was really sweet. Cooper was smart enough to battle Milo in tennis and not Pat, because Pat is better than him at tennis. And Cooper really could have been like a dad to Sunhigh, but then... oh my goodness that was so sad I feel so bad for Drake man...

Moonhigh's power is really cool. And it was a really good idea to add the flaw to Syls power (that she cant shapeshift if shes badly hurt). Because if something like that didnt exist things would get a little too easy..

but i loved it overall. Keep it up Syl, the story has improved a lot since the first chapter