Wyvernian Chapter 17 of TOT was really well done!

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Wyvernian Chapter 17 of TOT was really well done! Comical and genius. I think it's phenomenal! This is going to be so much so much fun, things are really starting to pick up!

I do think we should decide how they're going to split up though. Like what will the groups be like? Will they just be the regular casts or interconnected, so some members will be with others?

I also really like the idea of the humans being more distrustful of creatures and vice versa. I think it'd be cool if the idea is explored more often.

Drain mentioning how he died in his world makes me think that some wouldn't really WANT to return home. Obviously one would be Darkhide, because he also died. I think most of the survivors from Ultimus wouldn't want too either because, yk, they have to survive on Extinction basically... I think it'd be cool if we explored that idea. I think Neddy and Ruby would be pretty neutral on the idea of staying in the Omega Timeline, while Aurora would definitely want to stay (although she internally only wants it with the people she trusts). Samuel and would want to go home no matter what, and Star would be with him on that.

One more thing: I think one group should head to the black obelisk. I'm thinking once Ember and Drain try to tamper with it, it starts glowing like crazy. Maybe some more tensions begin brewing, but one person realizes that it has to be connected to the black obelisk. So they decide that they have to stop it or else they're going to just end up killing each other. The only wish I have is that Sheeri will go to the black obelisk, which makes sense since she's a wyvern. She's the fastest flyer out of all of them. So she will go to the obelisk (even though it's scary) with a few others and there it will set it up for bringing in the villains.

Other then that really good stuff! That was some super fun good stuff! Honestly I wish I finished TAOH faster so I can focus more on TOT.

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